Rejected Haiku

Submitted these recently, along with a few others. One was taken, but I kind of like these two that weren’t:

pink petals surprise
us as we arrive in town—
early DC Spring

Mountain of flowers
Rising from the houses—
Morning commute

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2 Responses to Rejected Haiku

  1. James Spencer says:

    Good riffs on Pound – what was the one that was accepted!?

  2. dmuranaka says:

    Hey Jim, It’s in the Notebook section of the Asashi Haikuist Network here:

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